This week for writing we had to do explanations. My topic was 'My favourite toy'. Here is a screencastify of my explanation. Click here to read the rest.
Kia Ora Katelin, I like how you have started your sentence of with You probably have 100 toys and 1 of them is your favorite toy. Next time you could add more punctuation into your sentences. Mai Ruby
Kia Ora Katelin, I like how you have started your sentence of with You probably have 100 toys and 1 of them is your favorite toy. Next time you could add more punctuation into your sentences.
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