Hello Katelin. I like your review on Peter Rabbit I like your setting.your events in the book are really cool. Next time you could add some more info into your statement. Good work keep it up from Kaleb S.
Kia Ora Katelin, it's Kyra here. Miharo work on your Literacy Reflection! I like your DLO for Literacy because there is lot's of detail to it. This reminds me of Literacy. Maybe next time you could try to say where Peter's home is. What was your favorite piece of the story? Ka Pai!
Hello Katelin. I like your review on Peter Rabbit I like your setting.your events in the book are really cool.
ReplyDeleteHello Katelin. I like your review on Peter Rabbit I like your setting.your events in the book are really cool. Next time you could add some more info into your statement. Good work keep it up from Kaleb S.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Katelin, it's Kyra here. Miharo work on your Literacy Reflection! I like your DLO for Literacy because there is lot's of detail to it. This reminds me of Literacy. Maybe next time you could try to say where Peter's home is. What was your favorite piece of the story? Ka Pai!
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