Friday, 8 February 2019

Writing Favourite time of day

Favourite time of day Dusk Walt;

write a factual description using precise nouns and adjectives

\like dusk because it's a time where nothings on and I can just sit down and relax it’s just becoming dark and the sunset is shining along the beach.

 

Dusk…. when the sunsets up the street lights making the road brighter and chilling as the sunset goes down the waves of the sea crashing against the shore as the sunset slowing reaches its end the reflection of the sunset makes the water look like the sky but wavy

The sun starts to go down it’s just above the sea all the colours blending together making it that slight bit more brighter.

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